Milo and John

Disney Sequel #1
February 23rd, 2007, 7:00 am

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JiminycricketX
Posted by JiminycricketX
February 19th, 2007, 5:23 pm
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This one speaks for itself, or Captain Jack speaks for it anyway. It was far too big a comic (two and a half pages) for me to cram into one page, so I had to cut it in half. You'll have to shuffle on ahead to the next page to get the punchline.

There are many things about this page I am unhappy about.

1. The crammed dialogue in the first 4 panels.

2. Milo in Panel 2.

3. No decent shading on John's script.

4. The shadow Gaston is casting in the fifth panel.

5. Jafar's bracelet's and belt are not shaded.

6. Beast's castle looks nothing like the castle from the movie.

7. I had to cut the comic in half to begin with.

Then there are the things I am happy with:

1. John came out better than usual.

2. Crammed or not, I llike the dialogue in this one.

3. the whisps of smoke in panel 6. look awesome.

4. Maleficent's green flame backround looks cool.

5. The clouds look awesome in panel 8.

6. The blood in panel 9 came out well.

7. Jack Sparrow is in this comic.


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Posted by JiminycricketX
February 23rd, 2007, 11:55 am
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Thank you very much. I was hoping to have the second half of this page done by today, so I could post them together, but it didn't turn out that way. I'll try to have it done by next week.



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